The Official Writing Challenge
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01/09/20
I am SOOOOO glad this is fiction - my goodness! Well written and I liked the ending.
01/09/20
Whew! I was wondering what could I possibly say to someone still grieving such a loss. It was a welcome surprise to see that this was fiction. Good job!
01/09/20
I was really carried along by this and was so relieved to find that it's fiction! Well done! The story and the wisdom it imparts could be expanded into a novel.
01/10/20
The first paragraph drew me right in, and as I read, I was eager to see what happened next. I agree that this could be made into a novel. Well done!
Wow-what a story, and glad it was fiction. I knew that there was too much good going on and the bad had to happen. You did not disappoint. Well done!
01/10/20
You scared me half to death with this gripping story, so much so that I had to look at the end to see if it was fiction or non-fiction. What a relief to know it wasn't a true story. You could write mystery stories that would be best-sellers. What a well-crafted, on-the-edge-of-my-seat piece. Big time Kudos!