The Official Writing Challenge
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01/09/20
What a great story! Well written from beginning to end.
01/09/20
I loved this, from beginning to end. Such a great story. Sure winner here.
I had teary-eyed goosebumps at your ending! Sure hope this places. I like how you interspersed body language and actions. Well done!
01/10/20
Beautiful writing. I loved everything about this story--the characters, dialogue, and how you tied it all together.
01/11/20
Great background to the story, and a heartwarming close. Very enjoyable read.
This is a delightful exchange between a little girl and her grandmother. The message touched my heart, especially this week. The only red ink I have is when using Grandma as a name, it becomes a proper noun and should be capped. You nailed the topic, gave your characters depth and personality, and delivered a great Christian message.
01/14/20
Captivating story. Held my interest from beginning to end.
01/23/20
Beautifully written. Well-deserved win!