The Official Writing Challenge
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01/09/20
This was absolutely delightful. I loved it! It held my attention from beginning to end, and the last line was sheer perfection.
01/09/20
Well done!
How wonderfully written and absolutely delightful to read all the way through!
01/10/20
I could imagine this actually happening with siblings.
01/10/20
What a wise mother!

Having shared a bed with two sisters, I really enjoyed this poem.
01/10/20
Oh, this made me smile. I could just picture it. Well done!
This was a joy to read and so cute! Well done.
01/11/20
Revived a few childhood memories here - and thanks for some of them! Loved the close.
Oh what a delight. As the youngest in my family, I too was tortured my threats of similar things. Once my siblings tried to get me to live in the doghouse. You created wonderful pictures in your words and the last stanza made me smile.
01/16/20
Hey Marianne. Great work here. Even the judges think so. Congratulations on your placing.
01/18/20
You kept me vividly imagining the scene and emotional struggle of that little one. Well done. Congrats on your placement.