The Official Writing Challenge
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12/12/19
So well written I could have sworn she was there! Well done. A very creative take on the topic.
12/12/19
Peaceful and beautifully written.
Even though I saw it coming, the ending gave me goosebumps!
12/13/19
I bet it was even better than Judith remembered it. I'm glad God provided a peaceful place for her on earth.
12/14/19
You paint a vibrant living picture that makes the memory live. Sometimes we'll only have these pictures to give us the strength and grace to want to get home.
12/14/19
Beautiful story.
12/16/19
This is so well written. It's lovely from beginning to end. Well done.
12/19/19
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish this week, Rachel. You captured a woman's peace of dying because of her faith in Jesus.
Rachel,

Congratulations on 2nd place in the EC.

This was lovely. You captured my imagination with your vivid images of the beach. I could feel the waves lapping on the beach and the peace it brought my spirit.