The Official Writing Challenge
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What an awesome story- I loved it!
12/07/19
What a nice story. You caught my attention at the start, it flowed nicely, and had a great ending. I could picture it as you told us about Alvin. Well done.
I loved the characters, the humor, and the Gospel in your delightful story. The ending was just perfect!
12/12/19
Big Alvin character has heart and soul. Congratulations!
12/12/19
Congrats on a fun, well- written story and first place finish!
This is a great story. The ending made me chuckle. I thought the bridge might break, but like your ending way better since it's important that it be our decision to jump in with both feet. Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!
12/12/19
Wonderful story, nicely written. Congratulations!
12/14/19
Well done. Well written. The Salvation message wrapped in a story. Thank you.