The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/19
Awesome!
What a unique take on the well-known story!
12/07/19
This was an entertaining take on the story. It was fun to see Peter's personality in it.

Personally, I was thrown off by the modern slang mixed in with the Biblically-set story, and I still don't know what a keener is.

On a technical note, watch out for repetition. I felt like the phrase, jump in with both feet, was overused.
12/14/19
Congrats on your EC! Well done.