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11/28/19
I think this is a clever metaphor. Nice job!
11/29/19
This is a clever take on the topic. It's nice to read something unexpected.
12/04/19
Working on that issue myself. Looking forward to getting 50 pounds off.
Good analogy--Now, if only I would follow your example--maybe after Christmas!
This is really out of the box. I think it's super creative. Be careful not to give the ending away with the title though. I think the message is spot on too. My son lost 50 pounds this year by vowing to lose a pound a week. That sounds more attainable than 50 pounds in a year. It's not easy, but impressive to do such a feat. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!
Barbara,

I loved this creative piece. I could really identify with your plight.

I have also been living off the fat of the land for many years.

I need to pick up on my walking but I just began to lose weight again

I will be cheering for you.