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He sounds like an amazing person! I was concerned that you would admit that his life ended early, as it often happens to such special people. What a blessing he is.
11/08/19
I enjoyed this story. We need more Coopers in this world. What a sweet ending. Well done.
Lovely story of a beautiful little boy. I loved it.
11/09/19
Lovely story.
11/12/19
Awww. This is so sweet.

Personally, I felt the ending was a bit abrupt. It was a good ending, and it fit, but it was kind of a hard stop for me. Maybe adding some quotes from Cooper earlier on (for example, instead of telling us he wanted to give people a cruise, have Cooper tell us) and then you could end it with something like, When Cooper saw the bikes, he was overwhelmed. "Wow. Three bikes? That one for me, and one for two other people. I wonder who took my bike? Maybe he has a brother who needs a bike too!" Or something like that.

Great job telling Cooper's story.