The Official Writing Challenge
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Was this a true story? It kept me interested to the end. Well done! How tragic for the sisters.
Powerfully poignant and so well written,
If this isn't a true story, I like how you have woven this inner dialogue between opposing viewpoints into two distinct characters - who just happen to be twins.
This just wrenched my heart because I could see myself so clearly in this piece. Bitterness and regret can really do a number on a person. I liked the ending too. Often, it's easy to wrap the ending up in a neat bow, but this ending felt real and raw. Well done.
My only critique: I wish you had more room. This could be a book. I'd love to see the whole story play out, with time to wrestle through the emotions the sisters must battle--and in the end, find hope in God. Lovely writing.

You held my interest until the end. Good story.
Congrats on your EC.