The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/19
Great dialogue that kept the story going at a good pace.
I enjoyed the empty cup and an idle mind. Just the right setting for a gossip session.
Ohhhh! Well done! I really enjoyed this vignette into a realistic conversation.
10/11/19
Well done!

Blessings~
You laid this out nicely. I liked the MC's were men since women tend to be the stereotypical gossip. Your pacing fit the conflict perfectly. Even though I guessed the ending, I think it was the best way to end it. You made me smile after a really rough day.
Congratulations! Happy Dance!
10/17/19
Good job! Congratulations!
10/18/19
This is great. Congrats on your EC.
10/19/19
Ah the twists and turns of office scuttlebutt.
Nicely written and congratulations.
10/24/19
I see why this story was a winner.
Only, one thing I don't quite understand. The word 'but' in this phrase: ". . . I’m going to miss you all but.”