The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/19
Well done!
Blessings~
I like the usage of the sandals! And the rose. Great job!
This is an interesting take on the Easter story. I think you did a fine job of sprinkling the topic throughout the piece, but I wish you hadn't used the actual word. Trust yourself that it can be on topic without using topic word. Here it just didn't seem to fit. You did a good job of bringing the story full-circle and the message is clear. Good job.
10/17/19
I liked this a lot. Good work
Congratulations!
10/18/19
Congrats on your EC.