The Official Writing Challenge
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This was good- a touch of Dr. Seuss-style, too! Great job.
09/12/19
This piece caught my attention right away. On topic with a meaningful message. Love the last line. Well done.
09/16/19
I loved the last line as well. Good job with rhyming and keeping the piece flowing.
09/19/19
This is absolutely excellent! Such profound wisdom in such simple words.
09/20/19
Congrats!
Blessings~
09/20/19
Congrats on your win!
09/20/19
Love the creative touch leading naturally to the HIM possible. Great take on the subject. Easy to follow along. Congrats.
09/21/19
This popped straight out of the gate. Very clever short bursts with some really nice twists on known words. Loved it!
Wow! Poetry isn't usually my thing, but I thought this was beautiful and it really soothed my hurting heart. Congratulations! Happy Dance!
10/03/19
A great message brilliantly written. Congrats!