The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/19
This needs to be an illustrated book. I would buy it. I didn't know that's where you were going with it when it started (when I'll stop loving you). It's perfect.
Awww! This is so precious! I could also see it set to a song. Hope it places high!
09/13/19
What a sweet and creative poem. And I love the ending. Well done!
09/13/19
Ahhhh.... so sweet! I love it! (I hope you read it to your sweetheart.)
09/18/19
What a fun and beautiful poem. I wasn't sure where it was going either, but it sure does give the impression of impossible.
09/18/19
This is classic! I hope it will be in your next book! If it doesn't win the top prize this week, I'll double your money back (or whatever). I love your imagery, your humor and your creativity in this masterful piece. How I'd love to be a cartoonist to illustrate this for a children's or even an adult's humor book.
09/18/19
Beautifully written!
Excellent job,
Blessings~
09/20/19
Congrats!
Blessings~
I love this. I think it would make an awesome picture book. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!