The Official Writing Challenge
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This is so cute! I can see it as an illustrated children's book.
09/12/19
I'm with Barbara. I saw it that way, too. Cute and with a good message.
09/12/19
Ooh, I like this. It's so cute and has a meaningful message. Well done!
09/13/19
The first line made me laugh!
As poetry, it would probably be better with more rhythm structure (a pattern of consistent beats) along with the rhyming (which was great)... or forget the rhyming and make it free verse.
I like the message.
I like the fun in some of your impossibles, and I like even more your conclusion.
09/18/19
I enjoyed this.
Well done,
Blessings~
09/20/19
Congrats!
Blessings~
This is awesome. I love the pictures you painted in my mind. It flows so effortlessly. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!