The Official Writing Challenge
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Awww, this is so moving. I like how you were able to figure how how to seek God's help by closing your eyes. Beautiful story and I hope it places high.
09/08/19
This is so beautiful! Made me think of Susanna Wesley, who would pull her apron over her head for a quiet place. I find the song drawing me in, often.
09/09/19
Aw, this is such a sweet story and a nice take on the topic. One of my favorites this week. Well done.
I love how you used Mama's love and her hymns to tell the story. Wonderful ending to a tender story.
09/10/19
Made my heart smile...sweet and touching.
Blessings~
09/11/19
A very touching, sweet story. I like how it came full-circle. Nicely done.
Wow! This is awesome. I still have a lump in my throat. I can relate to this on so many levels. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!
09/16/19
This is sweet and beautiful. I absolutely loved the ending. Just wonderful!
09/18/19
I enjoyed the contrast between what sends you to your quiet place for refuge and the peace you describe while in that quiet place. Congratulations on your EC. Well deserved.