The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a sweet story. How blessed she was to have someone who cared. Great job on this entry!
09/08/19
Ooh, I like this touching story, and it held my attention all the way through. Well done.
I'm liking especially the husband's kind understanding in this story of a lost girl, dealing with problems too big for her, and I liked, too, the sweetness of the narrator.
09/10/19
Oh, touched my heart.
Blessings~
09/10/19
Really, really like this. Can only hope there are more people like this in the world.
09/10/19
This well told with a gentle but persistent unfolding. And very spot on for the topic. Beautiful job!
09/11/19
I could feel the fear in the girl as the husband got out of the car after yelling at the stop light. And the melting of her guard as he apologized. You held my attention throughout the story. Very beautifully told.
This is such a sad story on the surface, but so beautiful in the heart of it. My heart aches for the too many Anns of the world. What a profound message. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!