The Official Writing Challenge
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My family would have pleased the demon, but glad this one did not. I liked how you interspersed the conversations. Good entry!
08/30/19
I love the spiritual warfare aspect of this story. You do an excellent job going back and forth between the two conversations.
Your story is powerful with right against wrong, God against Satan, showing the wisdom of godly parents.
09/02/19
Oh, I like this. I think many families would have reacted negatively, but hopefully it wouldn't have gotten quite as far as the demon thought it would. Nice job with this.
Whoa! Very creative. Entertaining with a powerful lesson as well. The parents acted like parents should, IMO. Well done.
This is an interesting story. You did a great job of developing the characters. Congratulations. Happy Dance!