The Official Writing Challenge
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What a fun read! It was like being on a merry-go-round that kept going faster and faster. I loved how it started and ended with the piece of paper. well done!
I am in love with this. So much fun! I'm betting it places very high.
08/29/19
I love the "IF You Give a Mouse a Cookie" format. This was really fun to read. I loved the humor in the burnt pizza. Great job.
And the beat goes on. I like how you made the story into a circle. Fun!
09/05/19
Love, love this! Very well-written. I really like the style. Also, congratulations!!
Oh what a hoot! I was Chuckling all the way through. The pacing was spot on and you nailed the topic. Congratulations! Happy, Happy Dance!