The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I loved this! I could hear the whirring of the gossip mill as I read to the end. Well done!
08/30/19
Oh, the joys of small town living! I am glad your MC choose to be more concerned about what Jesus thought than what Marilyn and her friends thought.
Not only can you write humor well, you can also tell a story to really make one think. I loved your MC. Great story!
09/02/19
Hehe. I like this. Hopefully her husband will understand, and defend her against the rumor mill! Everyone needs a friend.
09/05/19
Nicely done! I really like the message in this one. :)
This is a great story. It made me sad because so many people are like that neighbor. But you sprinkled humor throughout in all the right places. It's a great story with a powerful message. Congratulations! Happy Dance!