The Official Writing Challenge
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What a brat! I really enjoyed reading this and I hope it places high. Well done!
09/02/19
Hehe This is cute.

I got a bit lost on the line about going to church and not thinking twice about spending time with people unrelated to her.

So I'm still left with one big question.... who's adopted? And what does mom know? I can see a follow up piece with this, I think. Nice job.
09/03/19
Interesting story. A little confusing in places, but a fun read.
This is a fun story. You packed a lot of info in a short space. For me, you used the topic phrase a bit much. It didn't sound quite as natural to my ears. But I had no problem following the story (Daughter or niece and her mom or sister were both adopted 😁) and think it's quite clever. It left me with a grin.
This is a ton of fun. Your characterizations are great. Love the aunt, especially. Well done.