The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/19
Sweet!
08/23/19
I enjoyed this. On topic, made a great point, and it made me smile. Good job.
Loved your title! I was getting confused as to who was speaking- could have used quotation marks. Showing actions would add more dimension to your fun story. Keep up the good work.
08/23/19
I like this. Cute, but making a point.