The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/19
Oh my word. I certainly hoped he learnt not to say things like that again!

Fun read- I liked it, and I am not a huge fan of poetry.
You paint a great picture. Although poetry is not my favorite, you had me grinning and I laughed near the end.
08/22/19
This flowed very nicely and was a fun read. Glad they learned from it.
08/23/19
I like a poem that tells a story. And this one brought a smile to my face. Well done.
08/23/19
Oh, that poor bride! Made me smile though!
Loved your surprised ending! Well done.
08/24/19
This reminded me of a friend whose greatest meal, prior to marriage, was PB&J sandwiches. After the honeymoon, he asked, “Honey, what’s for dinner?” Their following conversation set her on a course for learning to plan and prepare meals for her growing family. She’s gone from being unfamiliar with cooking to dressing a deer he’d brought home from hunting trips. Nice work.
08/24/19
This reminded me of a friend whose greatest meal, prior to marriage, was PB&J sandwiches. After the honeymoon, he asked, “Honey, what’s for dinner?” Their following conversation set her on a course for learning to plan and prepare meals for her growing family. She’s gone from being unfamiliar with cooking to dressing a deer he’d brought home from hunting trips. Nice work.