The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting story. You did a good job of pulling me in and keeping my interest to the end.
I loved the language you used - it really enhanced your characters. This is a very unique take on the topic- well done!
What an enjoyable story. I particularly like how the two men interacted. Such pride in one while the other labors humbly, winning in the end. A great lesson.