The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This is amazing! Definitely a surprise ending. You did an awesome job in this realistic story. Well done!
The best surprise of all! Lots of truth here. Very nicely done.
08/04/19
You had me wondering what the surprise would be. Way to end a story. Well done.
08/05/19
Well written. You grabbed my attention right away and kept it. Great job with the topic and a very important message.
08/05/19
Chilling! It makes me think of Noah's preaching before the flood. Great writing!
Excellent throughout. You have a real gift for storytelling that satisfies.
08/06/19
Wonderful job throughout this entire piece and a strong ending with a message as well.
Nicely done,
Blessings~
08/07/19
What an ending! I wanted to jump up from my desk chair and shout, "Hallelujah! Even so, come Lord Jesus." And the wonderful thing is, for millions of believers this will prove to be a true story! Great job!
08/08/19
Loved it!
Congrats,
Blessings~