The Official Writing Challenge
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Cure story. I saw where this was going, but you did a good job in building up the suspense.
08/03/19
Aw, what a sweet story! Made me smile.
Sweet story. You nailed the topic. Kudos.
08/04/19
I like the honest feelings in this story, and I like the sweet ending. Good job.
08/05/19
*smile* I saw that one coming, but well done showing the feelings. I might have had Anna think her explanations rather than tell them out loud, but it works both ways. Great ending.
You showed very well our very human reactions when we feel we're being left out. Good story!
08/06/19
Your entry made my heart smile. Well done, I loved it.
Blessings~
08/07/19
Sweet story and sweet ending. You presented it well without stretching it out. Good job!