The Official Writing Challenge
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Definitely a surprise ending! At first, I was thinking human slavery, and then went to critter. Well done!
08/03/19
Definitely a surprise ending! You did a great job keeping us guessing at who Heidi was.
08/03/19
Nicely done, good surprise at the close!
Blessings~
08/03/19
Oh, how delightful! I was there with Heidi the whole time.
08/04/19
Good descriptions and a creative take on the topic. Good job.
08/05/19
The suspense of Heidi's identity was well done. Your little escape artist had me thinking the woman was someone who needed to be escaped from.

08/05/19
What a great POV! I was thinking a cat or a dog, at first, until the child pulled herself up to a standing position. I like the line - "Was this supposed to be fun?"
I loved this. I was with you in your story when Heidi picked up things off the floor to taste them. Fun!
08/07/19
Well, I admit you took me completely by surprise! I held my breath until the end, afraid of what you might reveal. Your teasing nature comes through beautifully and I'm sure you had a blast writing this. Very well done!
08/08/19
Congrats!
Blessings~