The Official Writing Challenge
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This is very beautiful, and comforting to me.
08/03/19
Very nice and how true it is...
08/03/19
Amen!
Powerful and inspiring.
Blessings~
08/03/19
Very nice! And also a message I needed to hear today. Thanks for sharing.
Lovely words conveying truth. I like the last line of each stanza.
08/04/19
There a soothing feel to this piece. Nicely done.
08/05/19
I really like the "anti-topic" approach. There are no surprises to God.

One stanza confused me. The one that starts "Whenever you may gain an awesome moment of bliss."I think instead of "That wasn’t given by Him," you may have meant it WAS given by Him.

Great message and wonderful poem.
Beautiful poetry--in thought and word and inspiration. This was a joy to read.
08/08/19
Congrats Yvonne!
Blessings~
08/08/19
Congrats Yvonne!
Blessings~