The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh wow! I was thoroughly enjoying the imagery, when all of sudden, the daydreaming became reality. It gave me goosebumps! Well done!
08/03/19
This one caught me off guard...nice ending!
08/03/19
Beautiful!
I loved this, well done,
Blessings~
08/03/19
I figured where you were going, but enjoyed it no less. What a great way to show the best surprise of all!
Beautiful words, beautiful thought. This is lovely.
Beautiful words, beautiful thought. This is lovely.
08/04/19
Nice imagery and great ending. Lovely. Well done.
08/05/19
I loved the contrast between winter and the spring of her memory. And even more the reality of heaven.

08/05/19
Yes, it's only a door - an awaking in the presence of the Lord. Beautiful!
08/07/19
How beautiful! Your word choices, your descriptions just blow me over! And anything that ends with meeting the Lord is always a gripping, exciting ending. Great job!
08/08/19
Congrats!
Blessings~