The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting and creative take on the biblical account,
This is a compelling retelling. You did a great job of bringing the characters to life. I don't think you needed to use the actual topic words (they don't sound like something he would say) because you do such a great job of weaving the topic throughout the entire story. Good job.
07/29/19
Excellent job,
Blessings~
08/01/19
congratulations!
Blessings~