The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/19
Love it! I like the abstract nature of the picture you drew, which became a clear view as I read on. Just lovely.
07/25/19
Beautiful poem! Very well done!
07/25/19
I like the contrast of the confusion of worldly pursuits and finding true meaning. The mention of religious things before more of the worldly things helps with conveying the searching aspect of the poem.

This is a winner in my book.
07/25/19
I like the contrast of the confusion of worldly pursuits and finding true meaning. The mention of religious things before more of the worldly things helps with conveying the searching aspect of the poem.

This is a winner in my book.
Wow! This reminds me of the journey through depression. Beautifully and powerfully expressed.
This reminds me of the Scripture verse that says we look through a glass darkly now, but the surety of God's promise comes through clearly. Excellent poem!
Wow! I can't think of other words. Wow, wow, wow! I felt like you had been spying on my inner thoughts and then created a masterpiece of words. Once more: Wow! This goes on my all-time favorites list.
07/29/19
Beautiful!
Blessings~
08/01/19
Congrats!
Blessings~