The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the way you interspersed the Scripture with the imagined thoughts. You also did a good job with portraying the emotions.
This is well-written. You painted the stark differences between the two women. I enjoyed reading this. Nicely done.
I've always been a huge fan of Biblical stories, being retold in a "personal way" -- you've done a great job with this entry.


I enjoyed the retelling of this story with your expressions of the emotions of the two wives. With you, I imagine the bitterness of the wife who once considered herself the favored one.
This is a terrific lesson. I love these kinds of stories that bring Scripture to life. Thank you.
I enjoy reading Biblical fiction and this was well written. Unique take on the topic with a wife-in-law.
You did a great job on this topic. I love Bible-based stories and wish I would do more of them. Kudos for good research, too!