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So cute your story is! I love the MC's comments of what the MIL says. Well done!
07/19/19
Ha Ha! I like how you incorporated it into a comedy routine. It takes the heat off of you. *smile*
Two things I suggest - 1. Leave off the first paragraph, and have her introduce herself to the audience. (or put it all in quotes to divide the speakers) 2. Have her serve thinly-sliced tomatoes to her in-laws, tying in the knife to the visit.
I loved this. Good job.
I bet the audience didn't throw rotten tomatoes at her, thinly sliced or not. I enjoyed the comedy club scenario. Nicely done!
07/21/19
Very unique approach to this well written entry.
I enjoyed it, thank you.

Blessings~
This is absolutely delightful. I loved it all the way through. What superb humor!
07/22/19
I'd love to be a speck of dust flying about in the in-law's home as mom-in-law talks about those knives. Impressed by those tomatoes was she? :) This was a fun read.
07/24/19
I like the comedy club approach. Great humor and great writing.
07/28/19
I enjoyed your funny story and creative idea for the topic. I would like to see the in-laws' reaction to the thinly sliced tomatoes. Great job. Congratulations!
07/28/19
Fantastic take on the topic and well written. Thanks for reminding me how blessed I am with my wonderful in-laws!:)