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This is a sweet story, like what I read in Christian romance books. Well done!
07/19/19
So sweet! With my son losing his wife to cancer last year, I can see two sets of in-laws for him eventually. I pray they are as welcoming to his future wife as your characters were.
Creative take on the topic. Lovely and well-written as well.
07/21/19
A lovely story, well done.
Blessings~
This is an excellent story. I liked the description at the beginning of what was seen through the window, as well as the meeting with his parents. The last line was just right.
07/22/19
I can't imagine being the newcomer to this family. I think I'd be as anxious, maybe more. I like how the family received her. Comforting.
07/25/19
What a beautiful story! I love how you wove it like a lovely tapestry and it made me want to read more. Keep writing!
07/25/19
What a beautiful story! I love how you wove it like a lovely tapestry and it made me want to read more. Keep writing!