The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow-what a poignant story. You really created the word picture of the shock and confusion. Well done!
07/19/19
Oh wow! How touching! It tells so much about the mother-in-law by her actions. Great writing.
What a beautifully written story with a wonderful message. My only criticism is it should come with a tissue alert. I loved this.
07/21/19
A beautiful tribute to a lovely and special lady. I think you always knew how wonderful she was, and she knew you cared for her too. Sometimes, unspoken words are the "loudest" and by your words in this entry, it was obvious you loved her and she you.

Thank you for sharing your heart with us.

Blessings~
How blessed you were to have such a godly, positive influence in your life through loss and gain. Your descriptions made her very real. I'd like to think she read your "thank you" from behind heaven's curtain.
07/24/19
Wow! This brought tears to my eyes.

This story shows true love that explains the meaning of MIL standing for mother-in-love.
07/25/19
What a poignant, sensitively written story. This could be developed into a geat book with a Christian message of forgiveness. It was honest, revealing and beautifully handled. Great job!
07/25/19
Beautiful writing, Karlene! I had a similar idea but didn’t write it. ;) Definitely well worth the win! Your writing captures the emotions of the MC and puts the reader squarely in the midst of the story. Keep challenging yourself to write. <3
07/28/19
This was so touching and beautifully written. Loved it. Congratulations!