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The last stanza-yes! Lovely meter and rhyme. Kudos.
07/12/19
Made me smile from the get-go, and I loved that last stanza that made a point!
07/12/19
Lovely.
Blessings~
07/13/19
From feeling like a haircut is a "pick me up" to the truth of the last stanza: excellent job.

I really enjoyed the different hairstyles you mention. It seemed like a walk through time.

07/14/19
A fun poem with a great point at the end. I'd hate to know how much of our lives are spent being concerned about and messing with our hair.
07/16/19
Oh, I could have written this! (Only not as well). I love your humor and I guess every woman at one time or another feels like the whole world is staring at her when she exits a salon with the worst haircut of her life. But a good haircut can make the world seem brighter and lift our spirits, can't it? Your meter and rhyme are right on target and I wouldn't change a thing, except to wish I'd written it ! :-)
Cute poem and the ending is right on!
This is a sweet piece. It flows lovely and it made me smile too. You nailed the topic and delivered a powerful message at the end.