The Official Writing Challenge
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Very moving take on the broken alabaster box account.
I like the title too.
Tender story, well done.
Thank you for sharing this with us.

Very well written. You bring this story to life.
This is absolutely priceless and if it isn't chosen as one of the top 3, I'll be not only surprised but greatly disappointed. One of my favorite lines was, " In His eyes was infinite forgiveness; in His smile was endless mercy." It was so poetic, so perfect and so compassionate. You have such a gift for writing and I look forward to following your journey.
I did not catch on what story this was until you spoke of the Man. Nicely presented, and brought it to life.
You did a beautiful job bringing this story to life. Funny, I never pictured Mary getting her hair muddy while anointing the feet of Jesus with her perfume. This gave me a new look at a touching story. Great title too. Congratulations!