The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful word pictures!
I love the beach, and your imagery made me long to be there at this very moment. To me, I did not get the sense of the topic, other than the dolphin's playing. But I still loved your poem about the ocean.
This is a really lovely description. I'm not a big fan of beaches, but you made it seem intriguing.
Lovely, lovely poem. I'm entranced by the imagery and the rhyme scheme.
Beautiful imagined of a trip to beach or ocean. Brought back memories of childhood but I'm not sure if judges will give high marks on topic.
Congratulations! Happy Dance! You are a sweetheart!
06/28/19
Congratulations on your EC Bonnie. I get the sense that you wrote this poem about a real scene and you brought it to life with your lovely words. Thank you.