The Official Writing Challenge
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Your poem was full of good analogies. The battle does belong to the Lord!
I like how you used the topic as repetition in your poem. I could see this set to music.
This is really lovely. The words flow nicely. You gave lots of good examples too.
Congratulations on your 4th place finish, Dave!
Congratulations Dave on your 4th place. You've used the topic well in this poem. I like the concept of great works being child's play to God. And the ending message is great.