The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/19
Your poem was full of good analogies. The battle does belong to the Lord!
I like how you used the topic as repetition in your poem. I could see this set to music.
This is really lovely. The words flow nicely. You gave lots of good examples too.
06/20/19
Congratulations on your 4th place finish, Dave!
06/28/19
Congratulations Dave on your 4th place. You've used the topic well in this poem. I like the concept of great works being child's play to God. And the ending message is great.