The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this!! Beautifully written with deep POV done well. I didn't realize who it was until I knew who it was (if that makes sense). What a talent. Great job, I was hooked right from the start and you kept my attention till the last line (which always gets me), "My Lord and my God!" Ah! Awesome.
One of my favorite people in the Bible is Thomas. Jesus loved him completely, doubts and all.
I knew from the start who you were speaking of. You did a great job putting a fresh spin on the well-known story.
You did a wonderful job of getting into Thomas' mindset. You pulled me in right away and kept my attention right to the very end. Good job.
Congratulations on your 1st place finish, Dave.

I like the way you breathe humanity into your characters.
Congratulations! Well deserved!