The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/19
I love this!! Beautifully written with deep POV done well. I didn't realize who it was until I knew who it was (if that makes sense). What a talent. Great job, I was hooked right from the start and you kept my attention till the last line (which always gets me), "My Lord and my God!" Ah! Awesome.
06/06/19
One of my favorite people in the Bible is Thomas. Jesus loved him completely, doubts and all.
I knew from the start who you were speaking of. You did a great job putting a fresh spin on the well-known story.
You did a wonderful job of getting into Thomas' mindset. You pulled me in right away and kept my attention right to the very end. Good job.
06/13/19
Congratulations on your 1st place finish, Dave.

I like the way you breathe humanity into your characters.
Congratulations! Well deserved!