The Official Writing Challenge
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I did my social worker internship at an adult day health care facility, and several of the people in attendance had TBI. Some did keep up note books like you spoke of. I've never considered how those journals could symbolize a type of restraint in a person's world. Good job telling the story.
05/27/19
I loved your creative idea for the topic! You kept my interest from the first sentence. Great writing.
This is a great story. You did a great job of bringing the characters to life. Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!
05/30/19
Congratulations on your EC! I could "see" it clearly as I read along. Great writing. ~Blessings.
05/30/19
This is SO good! Well told and crafted, with "grabby" opening and a smooth, uplifting end. Congrats on 2nd!!!
06/06/19
Congratulations on your 2nd place win,Leah.

It is difficult living with a TBI or any invisible disability.

Yesterday, my brother-in-law went to his speech therapist. She asked about his notebook. He replied, "I was thinking about writing in it, but that's as far as I got."