The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/19
Ha Ha! I loved the ending! Isn't true that each teenager thinks their life is the worst, when actually, theirs is much like everyone else's? Great job.
05/23/19
I was so relating to the common themes in the diary and had a good chuckle at the last line. Great entry!
I loved this! The ending was a great twist. I liked the rhyming pattern, and I think that this should score high! Well done!
05/24/19
Ha! Totally got me at the end. Cute and clever!
Your poem is pure delight! I should have known there was a "trap" at the end. I fell right into it!
This is wonderful. I liked how each entry was something common any teen might write. You gradually drop clues to the ending, but I admit I didn't see it coming. I love it when an ending surprises me because it happens so rarely. I truly chuckled out loud at the last line. Great take on the topic.
05/27/19
A delightful and entertaining entry. It's hard to imagine she wouldn't remember some of those entries but it shows our common experiences growing up. Thanks for the strong effort.
05/28/19
No, no, no. Yes, yes, yes. What a hoot! Did not see the ending coming. I must say, not only did I enjoy the story-telling but your rhythm and rhyme or flawless. Well done.
05/28/19
This one made me snort tea out of my nose!

So funny how the lives paralleled one another's though.

Loved this entry - I bet it places high.
05/29/19
This was such fun! And I loved the twist at the end. Really great job!
Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!