The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/19
Great job at freestyle poetry. You could feel the tumbling thoughts and the desperate attempt to make others understand. I love the repeated last line.
05/23/19
Thank you for sharing your pain. I know that can be difficult at best.

I enjoyed the distinction between "This is ME" and "This is me." (Although I didn't catch it until after I read the author's note. :) )
Beautifully written. Your words help me to better understand people with chronic illnesses such as yours. I pray that my sometimes insensitive words not cause more grief.
I'm so very sorry for your every pain and problem. However, it's so encouraging to see your heartbeat for others and your faith in your lines.
I think the word twist of me and ME is beyond brilliant. You touched on so many essential things in such a succinct manner. This part really screamed my name and brought tears to my eyes: I’m sometimes strong,
sometimes scared,
always human,
isolated,
wishing to be loved,
wanting others
to believe me,
show their concern,
hold me in their hearts
as I hold them in mine. You nailed the topic in a fresh way while bringing information to everyone who reads this. I want to share it with the world. But of course I will wait until the author's name is attached. This is something many people need to read. God bless you for being brave and strong enough to share snippets of your difficult life.
05/27/19
Powerful. The quick rhythm played well with how you expressed your agony. Well done.
05/28/19
I love the play on words here with ME and me. Well done!
I like the repetition of "Me", and didn't know until the end it had a double meaning. This is a strong piece; you drew me into your world. Kudos.
Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!