The Official Writing Challenge
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You do a great job of starting out with a pull-me-in conflict. I liked your take on the topic too. You really made the purpose of forgiveness stand out and the picture you created of Christ was fantastic.
05/16/19
Beautiful, well-written with a great message and perfect ending. Loved it.
05/16/19
Clever twist on the topic. I love it. Good writing. God bless.
Good story. I'm not understanding the significance of the sevens, but I'm sure there must be some meaning to them. I liked the mysteriousness of the encounter.