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I really liked this story, and its graphic descriptions. Well-done!
05/17/19
This reminded me of conversations I had with my daughter when she was young. It's sometimes challenging communicating with a child. Nice job!
I love the sweetness described between mother and daughter--reminds me of times with my children who were fearful when they were sick,
Ah, poor Wrigley. You made me feel badly for her. This is a sweet story. Love the conversation between mom and daughter. Kudos!
05/22/19
Very sensitively written. Amazing how easily a child can misunderstand the mother's words, but the great relief that comes when Mommy wraps her arms around her to comfort and reassure her. I wonder how mothers handle it when their children do have terminal illnesses and unless God intervenes, they might die. It's tough being a mommy sometimes. Well-written. I liked all the dialogue.
06/03/19
As a kid-person, I'm a natural to love this story. However, this sweet entry should grab the hearts of the non-kid-ites, too. Tender and real. Thanks for sharing the precious moments between Mom and child.