The Official Writing Challenge
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When I saw the topic, I was sure someone would retell this story. You did a brilliant job of it. It's fresh and unique. You made the MC so real and I don't doubt it happened similiar to how you described it. Your descriptions were vivid. I could feel her pain as well as her hope. Well done.
Great take on the biblical story. It really brought the MC to life!