The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/19
This is a precious, insightful poem. Your word carpentry is not only skillful but beautifully descriptive. I cannot write free verse, though I have tried often. But I admire those of you who do it and do it well, as shown in this well-constructed, sensitive, honest poem. Congratulations.
Beautifully spoken and so true.
05/10/19
This is so beautiful. I would frame this and leave it in strategic places in my home, to remind me that the words of my mouth are seeds. With them I can nourish or hurt. Beautiful work!
An important lesson to remember. What we speak can build up or tear down and we can never really take our words back. Well done.
Wow. This is so beautiful. The repetition is perfect. The imagery, detailed, and the message, divine.
05/14/19
Beautifully flowing words with a powerful message.
Not just a beautiful poem, but a wonderful prayer here--one I need to pray every day. Your piece is definitely out-of-the-box!
Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance!