The Official Writing Challenge
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As soon as you mentioned headaches, I yelled out "Brain tumor!" I was right. Too bad the family did not think that. Is this a true story? So well done.
Wow, that was unexpected. How quickly we all judge! Great ending. Well done.
This is a powerful story. I liked the twist on the so what and Reap what you so. It took me a bit to realize it wasn't a typo. Favoritism in families can be so harmful. I routinely tell each of my child that I love heror him best. We joke and they understand I love them all deep, y but also differently since they are so different. I think that's a great subtle message in this piece too.
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall. Happy Dance!