The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh my gosh- your ending gave me goosebumps! Your imagery was amazing. I especially liked the line "crazed percussion band is cavorting on the roof." Well done!
I can feel the angst in the words of the MC. You did a nice job of developing the character and writing on topic. The ending shows glimmers of hope.
05/15/19
Wow! After an experience like that, I don't know if I'd ever want to drive again. How exhausting. Great job at describing the moment.
Congratulations on ranking 13 overall. Happy Dance!