The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/19
You’ve done a wonderful job combining rhyme and reason. So many seeds indeed. Well done.
05/09/19
What a sweet, endearing poem! I loved your tongue-in-cheek ending about becoming a poet, which was a great last line. Good job. Big time Kudos.
This is great. I enjoyed each seed sown and then the ending made me laugh.
Oh I love this! Great job.
05/10/19
We sow seeds day in and day out, regardless if we think we are. I love how this shows the intentionality of certain seeds being sown.
I love this. You have a whole lifetime woven in your words. The last line is just perfect!
Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!
Clever and lovely!
Congratulations!
Blessings
05/19/19
I can relate to the message in this. I also favour the traditional style of poetry, and you've kept perfectly to the meter.
I avoid slanting rhyme mostly, but sometimes you need to sacrifice technical perfection in favour of the message.
Congratulations on your placing.