The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful story! I love how you wove the sounds of rain through it. I listen to classical music all night, and when I can't sleep, focus on individual instruments and that helps me sleep. I'm happy Tony is okay! Well done!
04/27/19
Beautifully written!
Well done!
Blessings~
04/29/19
The tension had me going the whole time. And what a beautifully uplifting ending. God bless you and your grandson. And praise God for miracles.
Good job writing a compelling and uplifting story. I am glad it turned out well. I was also glad you mentioned that your thoughts about God were settled, no matter what the outcome. For so many, the loss of a loved one doesn't fit with their view of God and there begins a downward spiral.
Wow what a powerful story. I felt your pain and thought the take on the topic was unique and fresh and the message perfect.
Congratulations! Happy Dance!
05/02/19
Congratulations! This was powerful. The tension held me all the way through, both of your grandson's health and your struggle to sleep. Well deserved win!
05/02/19
Congratulations on your 1st place finish, Graham.

Great job of showing the different moods rain brings--from peaceful to unsettling.