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Wonderful story! I love how you wove the sounds of rain through it. I listen to classical music all night, and when I can't sleep, focus on individual instruments and that helps me sleep. I'm happy Tony is okay! Well done!
Beautifully written!
Well done!
The tension had me going the whole time. And what a beautifully uplifting ending. God bless you and your grandson. And praise God for miracles.
Good job writing a compelling and uplifting story. I am glad it turned out well. I was also glad you mentioned that your thoughts about God were settled, no matter what the outcome. For so many, the loss of a loved one doesn't fit with their view of God and there begins a downward spiral.
Wow what a powerful story. I felt your pain and thought the take on the topic was unique and fresh and the message perfect.
Congratulations! Happy Dance!
Congratulations! This was powerful. The tension held me all the way through, both of your grandson's health and your struggle to sleep. Well deserved win!
Congratulations on your 1st place finish, Graham.

Great job of showing the different moods rain brings--from peaceful to unsettling.